The Mystery Girls

                                                                Officer John Anderson







                                                               "Good Morning Everyone today is May 28 , 2017 , My name is Officer John Anderson. Officer John talking in the morning news. There is somebody that is going around robing banks and people that's working in the banks not remembering anything". Officer John Anderson is a 27 year old police man. He is tall and have short curly hair.
"This case is the hardest case i ever worked on ever since i became a police man, I'm going to do whatever it takes to close this case"Officer John said before leaving the morning news.
 
"Hahahaha , this man anit never going to find us" said Christina to the other girls. Christina is 17 years old and a senior at East Orange campus High school. She is brown skin and has nice long wavy hair that reach to the middle of her back.
" brah anit nobody going to find us if we keep doing it like this" said Angel . Angel is 19 the strongest and the oldest girl out of three of them . She is a freshmen in Essex County Collage And she is very smart in her books. Angel is light skin with long black hair and she loves braiding it two sides.
  "Ya ll need to stop talking shit because y'all never know they could find us " said Mia . Mia just turned 17 May 1st and she a senior at East Orange Campus High School . She has long black curly hair that goes done her back , out of all them girls she is the nicest and the smartest. The girls always get her into doing bad things when she don't even want to.
   " Shut up Mia , and if they find us I'm going to know its because of you" Angel said while walking away to go downstairs.
       "Wake y'all lazy asses up " Angel said waking the girls up
    "Why you always have to wake us up like that " Mia yelled while walking to the bathroom
 "Because this is my house and i could wake y'all up anyway i want to and i know you do not have a problem " Angel yelled back
   "You girls always arguing like husband and wife when y'all two sisters " Christina said while laughing
Christina, Angel and Mia are three sisters and ever since there parents died they have been doing bad things now that they are living together. Their parents died last year when Christina was 17 Mia was 16 and Angel was 18 from a bad car crash.
   "You girls hurry up and get ready because TD Bank open at 11:00 am and i wanna get there a little early so it could be less people " Angel yelled in front of the bathroom door because both of the girls was in there
  The three girls was up to no good. Every weekends and every breaks the girls get from the school they always go to  different banks. So the girls was ready and they left the house when they got to the bank they went in nicely standing in one place looking at everybody. The girls made their move and went in the middle of the bank and took their guns out and told everybody to get down and gave the workers bags to put money in.
   Finally when everything was over with everyone at the bank went back to normal and the girls walked out like nothing happened and went home. That morning when the girls went home they went to their money room. That whole room have a lot of secret lockers with locks on them and that room is always locked no one has the keys but Angel.
"Okay so how much did we take today girls " Angel asked the girls while their counting the bags of money
" um mm today we have a little to much to be counting lets just put them in a locker already" Mia said while opening a locker
The lockers so big they could fit three dead bodies at once.
After the girls were done putting the money in the locker they left the money room and went to make sandwiches to eat.

The workers at the bank seen they have no money to give anyone.They don't know what to think and what to tell the customers. Customers yelling and asking for their money but the workers don't know what to say so they finally called the police and since its Officer John case he came to the bank. When he was asking the workers questions all they could tell him is that they just don't have no money in the safe all their money is gone.Officer John was confuse and didn't know what's going on the something happened to Bank Of America and Wells Fargo.
    "Their have to be something going on unless that person comes early before the banks open to take the money" Officer John said to himself while walking to his car
   Officer John Have no clue what's going on but he will find out.

 The next morning  , the girls woke up got dressed and went out to eat.
   "Are we still having that party tonight?" Angel asked the girls
"What party?" Mia asked giving Angel a confuse look
"A party that i am making at my house" said Angel
"You know we still having it" Christina yelled putting her hands up in the restaurant
"So you guys wasn't going to tell me you guys was having a party later " Mia said with a sad face
" We know how you are .. so why would we tell you?"Angel said

 The girls left the restaurant  and went to the market to get some sacks and drinks for the party. When they were done they went home and fixed up the place for the party. Angel gave Mia and Christina flyers to go give out. The girls came back at 6:00 pm with their party outfit in their hands.

 "What took y'all so long" Angel yelled to the girls
 "We went to buy our party outfits Duh" Mia said smiling
"Okay well go get ready because the party in 3 hours and some people come early " Angel said while walking to the kitchen to check on the food

Later, on that night the house was packed of people. The only thing Angel was worried about was her Money room so she kept the keys in her hand. One of the girls at the party was sitting down on a chair drinking and she seen a remote. Not knowing what the remote is for she took it . She seen two buttons and they said   "forget" and "remember". The girl had a little much to drink and hit the remote on the floor as hard as she could.
 As soon as Angel heard the noise she ran in the back and seen the broken remote on the floor. She couldn't even say a word.
 "OMG .. Who Did this?" Angel Yelled looking around
Angel was really mad and stooped the party and told everyone to go home.

 The next morning the door bell rang. When Angel opened it was Officer John Anderson . He told the girls they were under arrest. Officer John took them to the station and started asking them questions.

Angel was wondering how did they find them then she thought the remote broke. The day after the girls parents died the girls was walking then they seen something falling from the sky on to the floor. The girls looked at it and seen it was a remote then Angel picked it up. They had no idea what the remote was for but they seen two buttons that says "Forget" and "Remember" . Christina took the remote from Angel and went to try it on a random women that was walking by . She went up to the women slapped her and click "forget" in the remote and the women said her face hurt and walked away. The girls seen what the remote is for and ever since that day the girls started robing banks and using the remote to make the workers at the banks forget everything that happened but they knew once that remote broke everybody will start remembering.

 Officer John took the girls and brought them to their cell. The girls knew what they have been doing and they know they don't have the remote now to make everybody forget things. They girls got sentence 5 years in jail. Officer John was happy he finally closed the case very well.

                                                       The End

Lesson Learned: nothing stays a secret for to long because Once something in the dark it always comes to the light.       
 

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  1. Setting:3
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    Grade: 80%

    Proofread!!!

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